[BROKENmana]

plz help me im trying to see what else i should put in here its a burn/contrul with crakleburr main idea is to use mothdust changling with carkle burr and 1 other blue creature so all i have to pay is 2 mana and i can bonce any creature
the red side with crakleburr is to use hybird b/r and pay 2 damage 3 to player pay 2 more bounce creature
Well here's the deck it's Elemental, I don't know if people are playing a deck similar, but I haven't seen it at FNM yet.
plz help me  i need help with new cards to put in

Lands
4 x Primal Beyonds
4 cascade bluffs
8 x Mountains
6 x Islands
Total: 22 Lands

Red Creatures
4 x Smokebraiders
3 x Incandescent Soulstoke
4 x Nova Chasers
4 x Hatefyalers
Total: 15 Red Creatures

Blues Creatures
4 x Mothduster Changling
4 x Muldifters
Total: 8 Blue Creatures

Black Creatures
3 x Shriekmaw
Total: 3 Black Creatures

Hybrid Creatures
4 x Crakleburr
Total: 4 Hybrid Creatures

Instants & Sorceries
4 x Ponder
4 x Lash outs
Total: 8 Instants & Sorceries

Total Deck Size: 60


He hasn't developed a sideboard yet. He's been playtesting it lately. I hope you guys like it
Like I said at the start of this I haven't check around for a deck like this, but there could possibly be one.

[imachampion]

My question is...why stop at RUB? Why not go 5 colors and utilize the disgusting power of Horde of Notions? Here is an example list.

Lands: 24 1 Cascade Bluffs 2 Fire-Lit Thicket 2 Graven Cairns 2 Mountain 4 Primal Beyond 4 Reflecting Pool 1 Sunken Ruins 4 Vivid Crag 1 Vivid Grove 3 Vivid Marsh Creatures: 27 3 Cloudthresher 3 Flamekin Harbinger 1 Horde of Notions 3 Incandescent Soulstoke 4 Mulldrifter 3 Reveillark 3 Shriekmaw 4 Smokebraider 2 Soul Snuffers 1 Wispmare

Spells: 9 1 Crib Swap 3 Makeshift Mannequin 3 Nameless Inversion 2 Firespout Sideboard: 15 4 Fulminator Mage 2 Puppeteer Clique 3 Sower of Temptation 2 Wispmare 1 Crib Swap 2 Firespout 1 Eyes of the Wisent

There are tons of variations on this deck but...this is a pretty good example. I think that it covers everything that you are trying to do with your deck...only its a little more concentrated.

[Unforgiven88]

plz help me im trying to see what else i should put in here its a burn/contrul with crakleburr main idea is to use mothdust changling with carkle burr and 1 other blue creature so all i have to pay is 2 mana and i can bonce any creature
the red side with crakleburr is to use hybird b/r and pay 2 damage 3 to player pay 2 more bounce creature
Well here's the deck it's Elemental, I don't know if people are playing a deck similar, but I haven't seen it at FNM yet.
plz help me  i need help with new cards to put in

You did not use more than one period in that whole paragraph. Also the forums come with a spell check. Bless imachampion's heart for actually knowing what your talking about. This is not an attack on you, I'm just saying you'll get more responses if you clean up your post a little bit.

[Hexatomb]

I loved the quick game in R/U. This is my current R/U deck:

Lands: 20     4 Cascade Bluffs     8 Island     8 Mountain Creatures: 25     4 Crag Puca     2 Dominus of Fealty     4 Mulldrifter     3 Noggle Bandit     2 Noggle Hedge-Mage     3 Riverfall Mimic     3 Stream Hopper     4 Vexing Shusher Spells: 15     4 Clout of the Dominus     4 Inside Out     4 Lash Out     3 Unwilling Recruit

It's not the best, but for the short game, it's a lot of fun. It wouldn't make it long in pro-play, but for casual it's fun playing all of the critters and abusing the Dominus of Fealty and Unwilling Recruit for an alpha strike.

To make it more worthy for serious play, you could probably:
-2 Noggle Hedge-mages
-3 Riverfalls
-3 Streamhoppers
-4 Clout of Dominus
+4 Cryptic Commands
+4 Consign to Dreams
+4 Dream Fractures
+2 Islands/Mountains

I might be hedging on too much, however, you might not need the Unwilling anymore also. The win condition starts to blur at this point, though.

You might want to add in something like Call the Skybreaker or Vendilion Clique. But while keeping the R/U theme, I'd try to add back in Riverfall Mimic. Possible 3/3 unblockable is a great T2 drop.

Now on to the pointless flame by Unforgiven88. I understood him fine. We are all here to learn from each other and help the new players, no point in complaining about Grammar and Punctuation on the internet, I learned long ago it's too hard to teach Forum users English.   

[Unforgiven88]

"Now on to the pointless flame by Unforgiven88. I understood him fine. We are all here to learn from each other and help the new players, no point in complaining about Grammar and Punctuation on the internet, I learned long ago it's too hard to teach Forum users English."


If someone asks for information or help it would be polite to take the time to make a legible message. I make mistakes all the time but I do try for the benefit of those trying to help me to make my messages legible. This is not an elitist comment, what if a teacher said "..no point in complaining about Grammar and Punctuation.." to a child?

Overall if you look at the top post you'll see he didn't even bother using the built in spell check. It is pure laziness and nothing more. Why help some one who is to lazy to right click?

This is my last rant, (by the way my other post was not a flame, it was the truth) but it just seems we could all benefit from more manners, even if its the internet.

[Hexatomb]

Oh, don't get me wrong. I hate poor english and grammar, but after working the last 3 years with a team over seas, I hardly notice it anymore. ...Maybe it's because I've grown used to it.

My apologies, mate.

[BROKENmana]

Okay I'm going to make a point here. The person who wrote that article was 12 years old. He's my little brother. He just logged on using my name. See mom won't let him get an E-mail address yet, but for being 12 I think it was pretty well written, and for the most part not many people commented on the deck. I mean, come on he's all excited wanting to read what people thought about his idea, and all you can do is complain. Piss poor taste if you ask me.

Remember something are not as the appear.

-BROKEN-

[Unforgiven88]

You do your thing.